tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post7082431464998506624..comments2015-02-18T10:24:24.614+13:00Comments on C A Hargreaves: Day 1 Year 1 of Training - Ajax storyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10604847744333755496noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post-34211650436557401462011-11-24T21:59:56.196+13:002011-11-24T21:59:56.196+13:00Great opening! It draws you in and makes you wonde...Great opening! It draws you in and makes you wonder what her assignment is going to be and what is going to happen next!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post-77754342910180844742011-11-22T06:44:48.412+13:002011-11-22T06:44:48.412+13:00I like this start. It's an entrancing opening...I like this start. It's an entrancing opening, and it raises a lot of questions about the girl. I would like to see what she's going to the training academy for or what the name of the academy is. :)Hilarynoreply@blogger.com