tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post9043654628438499857..comments2015-02-18T10:24:24.614+13:00Comments on C A Hargreaves: Year 1 Day 1 LunchTimeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10604847744333755496noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post-31137608058102847152011-11-22T06:52:17.803+13:002011-11-22T06:52:17.803+13:00Awesome intro with new characters. As per usual, ...Awesome intro with new characters. As per usual, your dialogue is really working. When you read back through, watch out for tense changes. <br /><br />You know how I am about details. I would LOVE to see what the food looked like.Hilarynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202380240829536687.post-22302576973052766862011-11-12T11:43:32.109+13:002011-11-12T11:43:32.109+13:00Good job making her face her insecurities. Provid...Good job making her face her insecurities. Provides a positive image for other young girls her age. I'm an addictive reader now! ZoeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com